So Even Though I Walk This Earth
I'm Not Like I Was At Birth
I'm Minus A Heart And A Soul
I'll Never Again Be Whole

This Stanza really made my heart drop. its so deep and can touch even the hardest of hearts.
your writing is amazing,and you write for the same reasons as me. to let things out.
Keep up the great work, because your writing along with helping you cope with things,touches other peoples minds and hearts too.

Nice poem. ur good at rhyming. keep up the good work. i'd love it if you'd check out my poems and comment/rate them. thanks
Rachel