Comments : All I Want Is

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow Amazing this is a really true poem from such a true heart, you express your self here and you tell want you really like I love the ending, And the idea aswell, a true love can be seen here as the poem ends itself great piece for me dude great job and keep it up just dont stop writting ....

  • Hello
    waw...thats all i can say..its a master piece,,its more like a letter than a poem but it truley speaks wat u feel..and oh my god..so much question..i have so many question and i want an answer..i don't want to say anything about the poem,,i know u won't be to happy with it so i will email u...oh i emailed u today..i don't know if u saw it or no..but i do hope u have..but this poem is beautiful...great job...and iam so glad that u r posting so many poems..because i check this like 40 times a day to see if ther is any new poem by u.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    I got your email and nothing could make me happier, thank you as always. but as far as your questions....
    I really dont have answers,lol.

    thank you again.

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Beautifully written. i really liked this poem. very touching piece. keep up the great work =) xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Loved it goran, great poem, i give it a 5/5!!! great flow, keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Fantastic.
    This was so beautifully written and I could tell it was straight from the heart. You had a wonderful flow and great choice of vocabulary. =]

    I assume you know what love means,
    It is keeping a person in the heart.
    I guess now you know my story,
    Having a heart ripped apart.

    ^ My favorite lines, because their so origanal and very emotionally packed.
    You did a wonderful job writing this one, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Original* Whoops.

  • 17 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Wow this is an amazing one i really like this one the part when you put :
    I assume you know what love means,
    It is keeping a person in the heart.
    Iguess now you know my story,
    Having a heart ripped apart.
    that is my favorite line i dont know why i think its because i know how you feel. great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Scrittore

    Wow!! Your poems are great, you are really talented. Your comment was inspiring, thanks! I'll be back too :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, I loved this. You are a talented writter. The flow was outstanding as well as the strucutre. The words you used and the way you used them was fantastic. Amazing write. Keep up the Excellent work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Freddie

    Well done! this is so cool! keep writin dude! Im so addin u into my favs!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem. How cant relate to this one. I loved it:) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jose Delapaz

    Beautiful man good poem 5\5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Do you just write what comes to mind that day? honestly, you're subjects are things no normal person could make an outstanding poem about, but you manage it! god, maybe my b/f should do that for my best friend lol! 5/5, nothing better nothing worse!

  • 17 years ago

    by mazie

    Gd poem i really liked it u ave a talent and congrats bout your book. 5/5 . Mazie.X
    (ps thanks forthe nice comment)

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    You did a great job writing this one. it flowed really nice. wonderful poem! 5/5