by Chloe
Love this poem - we share the same views ;) the words r true and have gd meaning. kp up the gd writing xx |
by Sophia
Thanks 4 the comment, i love this poem, there is no justice in the world, none whatsoever |
You're smart for 13 to think of that..it's a great poem, and people really need to think about that..thanx 4 commenting on my poem ;) |
by Eddie
Sometimes justice is just a word with out havin any joyce. The rich get richer and the poor get poorer..... thats life I guess.... great poem eh. |
by emily
Hey, thanks for the comment on mine. i thought this was a great poem very deep but so true anyway keep writing. |
by emptysole
You wright well for your age keep up the good work |
by Angel_touch
Very deep poem, I love your writing style. And your right the is no justice in that. |
Lovely poem rings very true Thanks for your comment on my poem "Wind beneath my wings" |
Yes, Alice In Wonderland has inspired some of my poems. Like Alice in Wonderland trying to make sense of the way things are that don't make sense your poem shows the insanity of the absurd. You see something and try to make sense of it. Sadly, not everything makes sense at the time and sometimes will never make sense. |