That's kinda sad.. that people would drive themselves to suicide when the other one doesn't seem to love them.. anyway.. good work..

Of this is really good. i loved the way it portrayed a story. great write.

i gave you a 5. and i will actually vote, as in press the button.

david

Wow.. an unexpected ending.. nice job!

I think this should be in the sad poetry, i like you style none the less i think tht reading yourp oms always makesyou want to red in this is such a sad poem

xxx alex xxx (4)