So cold, so lonely

by Rafael   Dec 15, 2006


Dark night, slowly await
The cold is bitter, as bitter as hate
The hate in my hearth
Stop all feelings, the beating thwart
They cause pain only
They make You feel lonely
Enormous, gigantic
At the beginning frantic
Painful in the end
If You want to escape, hide Your head in the sand
The feelings won't though perish
You will need love
Sent from the heaven above
Believe...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job on your poem. Very strong emotion. Take Care Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Rafael

    Oh, erm...Thank You^^'
    Well, I write different poems, sad and happy ones, whatever my state is at a particular moment =)

  • 18 years ago

    by 888Trinity888

    Hey thanx for commenting on my poem! I really appreciate comments! This is a good poem!! it really gets across the feeling well! -Trinity p.s. Are you really from Poland? You have great English!

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