Nice poems! I love it, but I thought the structure could use a little work

Another great poem by you, you are doing great.

Loved it, it is true, love is not blind because there are always those things that set someone apart from the rest. 5/5

This is a good poem! it may need just a little work but i think its great.

Wow..beautiful poem.. but the structure of it could use some work.. and there isnt much flow.. but i think that is because of the structure problem

This is another good poem kitty, there are no flaws that i could see, 5/5!!!, thanx for the comment on mine!!!

This poem was written with such truth in mind! perfect
much love and many kisses,
bex