So far this is great, and i know you will make it better.
great job and a 5/5 from me.

Aww so sweet! great job!

Besides a few capitalizations this is a perfect poem, love it , 5/5!!!! keep it up!!!

This is a very nice poem, and even if i tried - i wouldnt be able to find anything wrong with it!

Narc xxx

Great poem BTW. and im sending you the link. =]

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=70754

I thought this was beautiful.
So very sweet and so nicely written.
You did a wonderful job on this.

This poem is very sweet and touching.
I like how you've written it
great job.

Wonderful poem. The love you have shines through in your words!

Very nice work love linda

This was beautiful hun, it was so comforting. another excellent piece.
much love and many kisses,
bex