by Anjel Dec 15, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
You are like a rose |
Hey nice poem/lyric I like it :) |
by WriterX
I really liked this poem, but I would change one think. For example in the last line you say "I would listen..." although earlier you give words like protector. Maybe if you tried subsituting all of the phrases into "roles" (like in the last line it would "listener") I think there would be a very nice effect to it. |