Wonderful poem. The flow was good. Good job, 5/5

NO WAY! Oh that's making me cry! It is so beautiful

That is really sweet, and I'm so sorry to hear about...well you know. I don't want to post so everyone can see. But this poem touched me, I teared up a little bit :'( . Your love and dedication really shows. But anyway, at least some good has come of what happened---look at this poem! It's ridiculously good!

Like all your poems, this one is good, flowed great, i give it a 5/5!! keep it up!!!

Wonderful poem!!!!

God blesss u

Dude, this poem is awesome. its so beautiful. it is quite sad thiugh. but i really like how th first 3 stanzas start the same, its cool it gets a point accross, i like it. 5/5.
xo~crissy

Good poem, i got thrown by the flow a little, but it was good. check your spelling on a few things. otherwise, it was a very heartfelt and sweet poem, very good job 5/5

Aww.. Its so sweet. I'm sorry if you've had your heart broken. Really.
Poems like this make a lot of girls smile so big; you never know. Anythings worth a shot, right?
I'de fall flat on my face for a boy who wrote anything like this about me.
Best of luck.

Ohhh. Joe, this was so sad!! But sweet. It kinda did seem like you stopped trying to make it rhyme or something. But that doesn't really matter, I guess. It was still good!! ;P

`Glenduh.

A very ordinary poem, a little redundant. The flow was a little to forced, and doesn't catch the readers attention.

It is a fair piece of work

-AnnMarie

A beautiful poem, I gave you 5/5.. keep up the good work;)

Very sweet poems. Here are some things I found
"And to long to wait "too"
"Don't matter what"
Do you mean no matter what?

Keep it up, Great poem!

It really is a love poem, all I read was raw emotion. It makes the poem great, but I think some of the lines were too long, and some too short, in the beginning you started to rhyme, then near the end it kind of faded away. Just re-read some of your longer lines, and read the whole to choose whether or not you want to rhyme.

Cute Poem

5/5

That was sad yet sweet. I could feel the love that you have for this girl and I could feel all of the emotions that you were trying to get the reader to see.

Mmmmm.....So of the flow was off in a few places, you might be able to fix that a bit, if you do this would be the perfect poem. Not that it's not great already! =]

Seriuosly, you did a wonderful job. You've got a lot of talent as a writer, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Wow very sweet poem... nice flow u do a great job!5/5

This one seems to flow strait from the heart telling it like it is. I like the style

Great poem joe, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

AWwww. That's such a sweet poem!
Keep up the great work
YOu're a wonderful writter.
The flow was very well done!
5/5 God Bless

~*Tay*~

Very sad, good poem though.

Aww, this is so cute. You really write beautiful poems. This is also kind of sad in a way. I love these parts the best:

Sitting all alone
That boy is me
Looking at her picture
In disbelief

You see, I love you
And I'm pretty sure
My heart doesn't lie
You're my life

Amazing Job! The only thing I can think of that you can fix, is to add some puncuations. You know.. commas periods.. stuff like that.

Excellent Poem

5/5