Overall i didnt think this was anything special. the flow was choppy and the lines were.. off. some lines were too long, or short, adn the rhymes were slightly cliche. also it was slightly confusing in the fact that you switched the point of view from to her and to you.

Good, not great.

x3Lauren

Good poem..Its really sad but sweet at the same time.
"I've always thought
When love was found
That people would do anything
To keep them around"
I loved that part. It was all good though!!! Great Poems..Keep writing!! And I will keep reading! 5/5

~Shae

I really like this poem.

Yet another greatly written poem. you are great.

Again this is another great poem that I have read by you. The only thing I would change is this line...."But, don't matter what happens"
to
"But, no matter what happens"
Only a small grammer error but this poem is really good. 5/5

Wow...i love this poem...

Ohh its such a sweet peom.....

Joe all i can say is WOW it brought tears tomy eyes seeing as i know what this about im so sorry it happend that way but through it you wrote an amazing poem keep it up ur VERY talented

Beautiful poem. loved it much.

This is an excilent poem. i can to relate to this alot with mine and my ex breakup. i hope things work out better for you then they did for me. but anyways back to the poem.
"Sitting all alone That boy is me Looking at her picture In disbelief" that line, i dont know what it is about it but it made me cry. your an excilent writer.

Aww...this poem was filled wiht so much emotion both love and sorrow.It was so sweet even though she broke his heart he still loves her with every broken piece.Excellent.5/5

<3Amber

So far, I'm in the third verse, and I've fallen into love wtih this poem.
The poem itself may have a raunchy flow (hahahahah raunchy teehee =])
but what the words are saying are soooooo relateable to, especially in my situation with my own long distance relationship.

I get to this line:

"Don't matter what" and cannot help but frown upon it. I don't care about the syllabication, just use "No"

=]

moving on...

This poem was short, sweet, and it is very touching. I love how you leave me here wondering whether you got what you wanted in the end, wondering if I'll get what I want in the end.

So did you?

6/5
~Stephen White

Aww..very sad but i liked the feeling behind the words...best hopes and wishes..tc..