These Feelings

Very nice :).

Hey wow. Great write. You're very talented.. I like to give positive criticism in my comments so I edited the poem a little bit to make it flow a little better. Take it or leave it or edited it hopefully it helps?? stop by on my poems if you ever have the chance. i'd really appreciate it.. But again awesome write! 5/5

These feelings that I'm feeling now
As you are holding my hand
They're some feelings other people
Just can't and wont understand

You are my everything
And these feelings are all for you
I can't help but love you so much
And all the sweet little things you do

Terri I love you more than anything
Because you are the girl of my dreams
Reading about love in fairytales
It's exactly what love feels and seems

I will love you forever and always
And we shall never ever part
Even through heartache and pain
You'll always have my heart

Some people claim we won't last
But I don't believe what they say
Because I've learned from the start with you
These feelings don't just go away

That was absolutely lovely. I enjoyed every word, beautiful. Five for sure!

This was so sweet. I'm sure you and your boyfriend will be happy. Who knows how long it will last, the point is he's with you now and hopefully will be since he makes you so happy. Beautiful.

"Some people claim we won't last
But I don't believe what they say
Because I've learned from the start with you
These feelings don't just go away"

Now i can definitely relate to that last stanza! Spot on witht this poem hun =)
W00t
5/5
*Gem*