Very well done on this poem Ciao.. The rhythmn and flow was excellent 5/5 xx

Great job ciao, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

I love the imagery.. it's perfect.. good job ciao.. 5/5 -virna

So sad. How hard it is to see the pain that seems too raw to bear. This was really well done. Loved the imagery you used to relate the feeling within the poem.

Wonderful
Jeannie

Beautiful. i dont see why people are downvoting you. its beautiful it deserves at least a 4.5. 5/5.

This poem along with the first verse in (shes finally over you) inspired me to write *cover the lies* lol

This poem had perfect flow. It painted a picture into my head and drew me in so quickly, the ending was well also. Great tie up to the poem. Wonderful Job

-/2 Terra

I love how you worded this poem...
good job...very well written.