by Ashleigh Skye Dec 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
A million voices in my ear, |
by Kaila
This was cute I loved it nice job!! |
by Cindy
Excellent write. Very deep emotions. Very sad and heart wrenching. |
by Sarah Ann
Wonderful poem. Its so different, and I love the idea and imagery you portray through your words. I can often relate. My favorite lines are: |
This poem is excellent. I especially loved the line "Plucking the apple while it's ripe, |
by aDORKable x3
Whoa, what a different type of poem. The person in your poem is crazy! lol jk jk It was interesting to get a different persepective in poetry. This was by far one of the most different and interestion reads I have read in awhile. Thanks for the comment, I really appreciate it@ =] |