Whispers in my Ear

by Amber   Dec 15, 2006


Nothing comes easy/ for those with fear/ i need more/ to keep me here/ far away the moon still shines/ yet it's sunny here/ with clear blue skies/ it's hard for me to look at you/ when i can not see your eyes/ even though we are far away/ nothing's better then today/ i fear that time/ will tear apart/ not just me/ but also my heart/ life will bring you tears of sorrow/ and it seems our time is borrowed/ i asked for more/ but was denied/ i can not tell you what i fear inside/ this is the best day of the year/ there is no snow/ no rain no hail/ just lots of sunshine/ and happy tears/ yesterday my skies were gray/ yet this is a brand new day/ tomorrow comes/ with sun and rain/ to bring me a happy day/ full of love/ and laughter/ and a song of sweetness/ which makes me just a bit sader/ i can not wait/ to hold you near/ and hear the whispers/ in my ear/

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow. Such a loving poem. I can feel your emotions through every word.
    The only complaint I had was the structure. I'd be better if you broke the poem into stanzas. As a reader, it would be easier to comprehend and read easier.
    Overall, very good job! 5/5 Keep it up!

    Stephanie

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