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Burning~Wings

Flows really well. I really like the ending, it has alot of sad finality. Real dark and y.

I luv this one! great ending! well done! keep itnup!

Wow, that was so sad, i had tears in my eyes from reading this.
very deep and emotional,
you are very talented, keep writing
xxxx

Another sad one. It is rough to be a teenager. Keep putting your thoughts to paper.

Another really emotional piece, your poems come straight from the heart and you can tell this when reading them. Good flow and rhyming!!
5/5

Aww so sad but still really great i love this poem.. it really tells the story of this girl.. amazing job!

This poem really hits home because I know someone that went through changes like this.

I loved every part of this poem, it flows very nicely and really has a lot of emotion. At least, for me. It really paints a picture in my head. I liked it a lot! <3 5/5!

Wow I really liked this poem very much. I can relate to this so much. I loved the way you described the girl in the mirror image. Great job, your a really good writter. 5/5 keep up the good work

Great poem
Its like a short story that captures the reader's attention from the start

Very sad, but very well written!

I LOVE this...so heartbreaking to read, and yet so wonderfully written.
The imagery you portrayed created vivid pictures for me, flow was good throughout and I thought the ending was very intense and hardhitting.

Wow its a very blunt poem... some people can even relate to that problem that still occur today ... good job and keep up the good work

I think I like this one the best. Such truth behind it. I love the ending. Although its sad that she thinks she cant change. Really nice work on this one.

Unoriginal, but better than a lot of poems I've read written on this topic.

I think the structure would be better like this ;

[She looks in the mirror and doesn't recognize who's staring back,
Her eyes have gone dark, some say they've turned black.

Her face has changed, it's really gone pale,
She hears what they say, but the comments have gone stale.

She's stopped eating, she's thinner than a stick,
Everyone she knows says she always looks sick.

She doesn't realize her wrists are scarred,
She can't remember cutting them up with a glass shard.

Even she can tell her personalities gone brittle,
She's fading away little by little.

She looks in the mirror and realizes she's gotten really strange,
She's looking in this mirror and realizes she's never going to change. ]

It makes it easier to read. =]

Great.. 5/5 definately...
loooove it.
you should read & comment some of mine sometime.. :D
<3 amanda

The problem with this poem is it's lack of attention towards its syllabication. You need to create a flow... if the poem is choppy, the reader won't find it worthwhile to read. You need to make it look appeasing to the reader.

away little by little. = away, little by little (otherwise, it would seem like a run-on)

gotten really strange = strange? I don't think strange is quite the word that you are looking for.

Interesting end... Kind of a unique ending for the cliche topic. I still think that had you made your poem smoother, you could have worked on the syllabication, and it could have primped up your poem a little bit... but other than that well done.

5/5
~Stephen White

The flow was a little off. But Overall I thought you did a good job.
It was really sad but enjoyable. I love how you explained how she changed but couldn't remember how. Well done.

A unique peice,
Elaine.

Really deep this poem applies to all the people in life who have given up and need something to slap them in that face and say get up and move on with your life.
wow sorry i don't know what just happened to me, well i won't erase it because one day i'll understand what it means. back to your poem loe it really i do it is a great piece and you should be proud:~)Sam