by Breeanna
I pretty much love it. i like the flow of it and the wordings and i can understand where its comming from. 5/5 keep writting! --breeanna. |
Very touching lyrics reflecting the pain of rejection |
by Rachel RTVW
Are these lyrics to a song or a free verse? Either way very nicely done.5/5 |
by Rona
The imagery was absolutely beautiful! I loved how you use words to convey such deep stories. Great job! |