Comments : You Had Me When You Smiled

  • 17 years ago

    by BehindThisSmilex

    LOVE it!!

  • 17 years ago

    by MyEscape

    Great poem! It really touched the heart and had me feeling all ooh and aww. ! LOL ! I'm really enjoying your poetry. I'm sorry my comments aren't long, but I do enjoy each piece! My Favorite lines were

    I won't say forever, because I know forever lies
    But I always forget when I look into your eyes

    Good job!
    *ME*