Comments : The Dead of Winter

  • 17 years ago

    by pilar ann

    "Like the whisper of forgotten songs
    That touched your soul so tender
    It'll leave its breath within your heart
    Come the dead of winter."

    i like thisverse a lot..
    good write!!

    ~pilar ann

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Okay, this is my first comment of 8, which may have to be done over time, because I've left so many on your poems as is. lol But I thought this was a new style for you, very well done, and makes you want to put on a sweater. I really liked this piece!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by SherryAmpz

    I agree with my mommy pilar... that verse really got to me... =) It's great