Comments : My fantasies

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Lost in a sea of poems and dreams
    My storybook of fantasies"

    Excellent opening! It really sets the scene for the rest of the poem and you had some beautiful language in this piece
    Excellent
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey this was really good. i loved the words u sued to express urself. beautifully written.. thank u for the comment on my poem. meant alot xx