Gem It is with a smile on my face I now go to bed! This one had me fooled! Excellent!

I'm touched that my poem Daddy Don't moved you to tears. That meant a lot, but I hope your make-ups fixed now! lol I have to say, this wasn't a fav of mine from you. I mean it was right on with flow and rhyme, but I guess I just didn't find it all that funny....I know I had one called Getting Old, that more ppl I knew said was sweet than funny, so I guess it's in the eye of the beholder. Sorry......but I still love your stuff!!!
Charisma*

Hey... that was really funny..LOL! but it's true... I love dairy milk, too.. It's a great poem... keep it up.. =) LoveLots

Hmmm....when I fist started this poem...I was like, this should be in the love poems...but when I read that last stanza I was like "Hee hee!" Good poem!
xoxo

*first, sorry

Ain't nothin' like a bar of Chocolate. This was a very cute tribute to woman's best friend.

The flow was great. Wonderful job on this.

Jeannie

Hahaha, that's so funny... keep it up :p

Ha Ha! Give me the chocolate!

Kelly
xx

Aaahh yes....chocolate.....the second best thing in life :)

Good poem, great rhyme and flow. 5/5

LMAO that is so CUTE! i love it! great job! =] now im hungry!

Lol at first i was thinkin this poem was misplaced but lol nvm. it was a great poem!

LOL....this was cute, good climax in the end, never thought it would turn out to be like this.

all the best and take care

Hahahahahaha

Hey great poem
yep diary milk all the way yummy
keep up the good work

LOL this is cute and funny. great job. i agree choclate brings perfect bliss

Lol. great job