Stolen self

by melly   Dec 16, 2006


U stole the one I cared so much for
yes u did
u stole him away
I remember
that terrible day
the saddest thing is
u stole yourself
u could not be saved
even if u were given help
yeah thats right
I cared for u
until that fateful night
u came round to my place
and u thought u could invade my personal space
you were taken from me
and now your gone
whats left of my love u shall never see

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  • 17 years ago

    by emptysole

    Graet job bravo keep up the good work =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    "u came round to my place
    and u thought u could invade my personal space
    you were taken from me
    and now your gone
    whats left of my love u shall never see"

    Very powerful ending.
    You used some good language in this poem.
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

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