Comments : Stolen self

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "u came round to my place
    and u thought u could invade my personal space
    you were taken from me
    and now your gone
    whats left of my love u shall never see"

    Very powerful ending.
    You used some good language in this poem.
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by emptysole

    Graet job bravo keep up the good work =]