Wow this is really good. I didn't think it was long at all, I think you tied it up well. You put a lot of emotion in it. You deserve a 5/5

I really like this poem. It's very long, but the story behind it makes it well worth reading. I really like the way that in the beginning, she just practically seems doomed.. but in the end, she finally got free and killed him instead. Great job on this. It seems very well thought out and very well written. Great job on this! 5/5

Oh wow this is such a sad poem. probably the sadest i have ever read. it made me cry. amazing job you did on this. i hope this isn't true. 5/5

~Kristina

Oh wow this is such a sad poem. probably the sadest i have ever read. it made me cry. amazing job you did on this. i hope this isn't true. 5/5

~Kristina

Ah`mazing poem . It`s sad and has emotion in it -- Altho` a bit of editing could make the poem better . At some parts near the middle the rhymes were a bit rocky, but the poem was very well written overall .
..__MiNDYY

Long, but very worth the read. I could feel the sad emotions pouring out through every word and it was a pleasure to read. It had a nice flow and the vocabulary was amazing. Wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Omg i love this poem its absolutley awsome i can relate to but u hav an awsome skill im quite jelous keep writing im gonna keep reading urs it deserves two thumbs up and a BIG HAPPY 5 WOOO love use

The fourth line of almost every stanza is forced. Rhyming is quite the task to uphold and often times it can ruin the flow or meaning in a poem.

It follows story structure, which is a good thing. But it lacked a concrete conclusion.

There are many repetitive words such as "he, she, I, and, really, then" that hamper the flow and story telling.

I must say I do not know what message you were trying to convey. Remember a strong beginning, middle, and end make the conventional poem original.

I was in awe of your work and it almost made me cry .. there are a lot of girls that are going through that too and shouldnt be. this is a great piece

Well you know i don't like reading long poems but i've gotta say out of all the poems i've read of yours this has got to be the best. scared me a bit though at how certain parts of the peom got me thinkin a little closer to home.
Definately 5/5

This was so good. You captured things perfect! I did a researh paper in college about Women who kill their abusers. I would have loved to have had this at the time. Excellent, excellent!!!!!