"The way that you joke
Can cause me to smile"

This couplet I can relate to because I am soo in love and he's very funny! You're poem flowed very nicely and it was great! I love it!
xoxo

Your writing is always excellet! You make the reader feel like they are right there in the poem. Excellent!

Hey this was really good. very well written xx

Most girls will agree with this poem, sadly most get treated like crap and they deserve soooo much better, loved it coz its true :))

I agree with the above comments, this is realli realli gud, keep it up!

Twists & Turns...simply amazing, really loved the way you potrayed everything, contradicting feelings.
good theme

all the best and take care

Freakin awsum! 5/5.

That was very good.
Keep up the great work.
YOu're going in my favorites
because all of your poems are
amazing and I love every single one that I read of yours. Well done!
God Bless 5/5

~*tay*~

Great poem you should keep writting

I love it

I really like it cause it relates to your feelings and to real life