The last and certianly the least

by Summer   Dec 16, 2006


If I died,
Would you cry?
Would you remember me forever?
All the time we spent together.
Or would you cry for a few days?
Then watch as everything fades.
Would you think of me everyday?
Would you still laugh at the things I use to say?
Would you cry for attention?
Then run in another direction.
Would you think of me for years?
Or only until the memories disappear.
Would you forgive all the pain that I've caused?
Or hold a grudge that will never be lost.
What would you say?
After my last day.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lillye

    Would you cry for attention?
    Then run in another direction.
    Would you think of me for years?
    Or only until the memories disappear.
    ..
    Brilliant Line. Amazing poem.
    Holds Alot Of Emotions In There. & Its Powerful Because Of Them.
    Keep Up The Great Work.i Look Foward To Reading More Of Your Work.
    x

  • 18 years ago

    by xxMagioxx

    I really like this poem, I can really relate, to me, its a good length, I like short poems. like Dawn said it has a lot of feeling but in it.

    Tony :D

    I have been looking for a person to talk to on msn to get this feeling out of me so if you want to talk I would be greatful.

    Oh by the way, when you have time, comment on some of my poems if you would plz.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lillye

    Great Poem
    Alot of emotion in there, maybe you could extend it a little bit? the ending seems to open so many other doors
    Keep Up The Good Work!
    -Dawn-
    x

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