Great Poem
Alot of emotion in there, maybe you could extend it a little bit? the ending seems to open so many other doors
Keep Up The Good Work!
-Dawn-
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I really like this poem, I can really relate, to me, its a good length, I like short poems. like Dawn said it has a lot of feeling but in it.

Tony :D

I have been looking for a person to talk to on msn to get this feeling out of me so if you want to talk I would be greatful.

Oh by the way, when you have time, comment on some of my poems if you would plz.

Would you cry for attention?
Then run in another direction.
Would you think of me for years?
Or only until the memories disappear.
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Brilliant Line. Amazing poem.
Holds Alot Of Emotions In There. & Its Powerful Because Of Them.
Keep Up The Great Work.i Look Foward To Reading More Of Your Work.
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