Perfection

by Breanne   Dec 16, 2006


Is She not as strong as you once thought?
Did her pain and feelings surprise you?
Is there a reason you did this?
Was it wait until she falls?
Until she cowers and cries upon her knees
Was it lets wait until she's broken.
And she needs to be fixed?
But she can't be fixed because she's destroyed herself.
She's destroyed herself because of you've done.
but she'll fix herself to prove you wrong.
And yes she's destroyed,
And yes it will take time
Bus she can do it.
For
She's her own portrait of perfection.
and the only reason she can't see right now
is the frame the portrait is in
is a little dirty.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Good poem, loved the message and the way it was written. Just a few mistakes i picked up...
    *She's destroyed herself because of WHAT you've done.*
    *BUT she can do it.*
    *is BECAUSE the frame the portrait is in
    is a little dirty.*

  • 18 years ago

    by nicole

    This is soo cute