Door to my Heart

by Joseph Koglin   Dec 16, 2006


You open a lock that has never been unlocked before.
With a key that only you withold.
You hold the key to my heart, to my soul
You open it and behold.
Out comes how I feel for you, every emotion, every tear.
I care for you so much it makes me cry.
Because without you I know I'd die.
I'd die of agony and despair.
I'd sit there waiting for you for years.
Eventually I'd die, crying, from my tears.
I love you so much it's unreal, how much I care.

Joseph Koglin

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bridget

    Really good 5/5!! except there is one little thing i want to point out. You said you'd die of agony and despair and then a couples of lines later you said you'd eventually die crying from your tears. So i think you need 2 change one of the lines a bit so it doesn't say you'd die twice. If you see where I'm getting at.. otherwise excellent!! and i loved the idea of the key to your heart thing.

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