My moon
by LifeLess Dec 16, 2006
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My moon is dark My moon is blue my heart turns cold as i come to see you. i slit my wrist but i just cant tell because i cant find you down in the depts of hell. so i guess you went up instead of down when you told me you would always be around.It was all a lie it was never true. Now my moon is dark,my moon is blue my heart stays cold in remebrance of you! |
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17 years ago
by Boy
Well thts sweet writing. gd luck. may you live long
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17 years ago
Sad. great flow. great choice of words. i liked the metaphors of everything. very well written. could defiantley be tweaked and made better but its still a great poem.
