Your greatest enemy

by Fallengod667   Dec 17, 2006


I'm the one,
Who kills your soul,
Before your body falls.

I'm the one,
Who breaks you down,
knowing all your flaws.

I'm the one,
Who takes away,
Everyone you know.

I'm the one,
Who takes your heart,
And turns it into stone.

I'm the one,
Who finds your dreams,
And makes them into dust.

I'm the one,
That you hold dear,
That you thought you could trust.

I'm your mother,
I'm your father,
I'm the who let you down.

You all know me,
yet you still don't see,
that this is the way things will be.

You will be cheated,
you will be used,
by the people closest to you.

A friendly warning,
From one who knows.
That things are never what they seem..

Your closest friend,
Will one day be..
your greatest enemy.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Your closest friend,
    Will one day be..
    your greatest enemy.

    ^^That is true the one who knows you inside out will be the one to crush you form inside out. It just takes a situation to turn a friend into an enemy. Then again we are our own enemies!

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Great ending...excellent write 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Wow.......its actually the truth and the flow was great! it was definetely a very creative! i loved the whole thing ur talent is one of a kind! keep em coming!

  • 17 years ago

    by Thomas

    Nice. It has an interesting flow to it. I almost got bored with the repetition but you finished it up clean and made your point in a very artistic and creative way. Nice finish.. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Great poem...definately a 5/5...great moral too...it's true as well, things aren't always what they seem...especially when it comes to pikin the rite friends!!! Anyway keep writing the way u do LUV IT!!!

    *Trixie*

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