That's really nice. I like the way it flows. good job!

-Aera-

Wow!, i loved this one. it was soo good, im gonna read the reast of ur poems now :D, well, most of them :P

Very well written, and sadly sometimes true.......
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

This has a lot of truth to it. Great job!

Great poem...definately a 5/5...great moral too...it's true as well, things aren't always what they seem...especially when it comes to pikin the rite friends!!! Anyway keep writing the way u do LUV IT!!!

*Trixie*

Nice. It has an interesting flow to it. I almost got bored with the repetition but you finished it up clean and made your point in a very artistic and creative way. Nice finish.. 4/5

Wow.......its actually the truth and the flow was great! it was definetely a very creative! i loved the whole thing ur talent is one of a kind! keep em coming!

Great ending...excellent write 5/5

Your closest friend,
Will one day be..
your greatest enemy.

^^That is true the one who knows you inside out will be the one to crush you form inside out. It just takes a situation to turn a friend into an enemy. Then again we are our own enemies!