Wow...i can't believe you havn't gotten a comment on this one yet...i love the ending, very good...hope to read more soon...5/5
Shane.

Interesting, something about it just made me love it im not exactly sure. I really like how it doesn't look like a traditional rhyming poem. Intense. XD i liked it.

Wow, that was really good, I love it! It's just so full of emotion, really extremely well written. Keep it up!!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

Great poem, i foun it interesting amd really liked it, keep up the good work ur really talented. i;d love it if you'd check out my poems and comment/rate them thanks alot!!
Rachel<3