by Michael D Nalley Dec 17, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
other
Marrissa Mabee, tall and delightfully slender |
Love your description so deep and detailed... good job |
by Clarissa
Really loved the flow not forced at all seem to came w/ lots of love 5/5 |
Wow, Like always, I loved it. Your poems are always so full of emotion and the Flow was just outstanding. The Rhyming was subperb, and the structure was great. You have a lot of talent, keep the the excellent work. |
by ALEX
Great poem, marrissa sounds like an amazing person. looking forward to reading more. |
by Goran Rahim
Another great poem by the the greatest poet. It was really great.5/5 |