Another great poem by the the greatest poet. It was really great.5/5

Great poem, marrissa sounds like an amazing person. looking forward to reading more.

--Parker

Wow, Like always, I loved it. Your poems are always so full of emotion and the Flow was just outstanding. The Rhyming was subperb, and the structure was great. You have a lot of talent, keep the the excellent work.

Peace, Joe

Really loved the flow not forced at all seem to came w/ lots of love 5/5

Love your description so deep and detailed... good job