Wow,you put alot of discrimption(sp?) in this poem...very well done

The darkness is complete, wat a starting line. just shows us how this is a dark poem and that life is cruel.

fight against it! very well done. fantastic! 5/5 again David

Well I'm thouroughly (I think there are too many u's in that lol) but it could be because I'm deprived of food right now too, lol.

//Khrystyne\\