This poem is great, but in the first paragraph you should fix up the last 2 lines.
Other than that, Great poem, And I love the rest of your poems. 5/5 =] keep it up

You and ur emo poems...but its good anyways

Beautifully written and sad also you can feel the emotion well done. 5

"I found a hole bigger than a crack,
should I crawl back into time?
or should I repair the hole back,
and stay in the timeless memories of my mind?"

woow... stunning, as always. glad to see you're posting again :) keep it up!
-xXx-

Kewl poem robert....

I loved this. Sad and heartfelt. I can say I could relate to this in some way or the other. Which is what makes me like it more. And I loved the ending. One thing though,

""this place" is so quite, empty, and plain," ...should 'quite' be 'quiet'?
Anyways, excellent write. I loved it! Never stop writing! Take care.

` Poetess

Awe. I can relate to this on a high level. Keep up with the good work. :}

Good choice of words! i like it

Really good. :] 5/5

This poem is very well written. I like the imagery, b/c I could paint a picture in my mind while I was reading.

You still have your amazing talent. Love it

Nice poem! i like this stanza the most:
Feelings are shattered in this hell,
Emotions coursing through the veins of "this place",
It seems I'm running out of oxygen in which I dwell,
but this is my new life in which I embrace.

"this place" is so quiet, empty, and plain,
but it's my home and it keeps me sane.