This poem is awesome. The words are really powerful and they kinda just blow you away all i can say is "Wow"
Great rhythm&rhyme too.
xxBonnie

THiS iS AN AMAZiNG POEM. I can't believe it; everyone I find here is 13 (like mee. =]) and they're all such WONDERFUL writers. Iono if i'm a good writer. You should check my poems if you're bored one day. =]