Love

by @ng3l   Dec 17, 2006


I found the perfect man yes its true
and no one can replace him not even you
he's the man of my dreams and even more
he's the only one i truly adore
i love him with all my heart
i loved him when i first saw him right from the start
no one can take him away from me
because we'll be fight i don't care were it will be
i care for him allot
to the point that I'll take a bullet if he was to get shoot

I'm not finish as yet but plzz comment and vote thanks

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  • 17 years ago

    by catherine

    There's a few spelling errors in there, just FIY. I liked it, and I could tell your feelings which is a good way to write. The only thing is that it didn't flow as well as it could.
    This stanza;
    i love him with all my heart
    i loved him when i first saw him right from the start
    I felt went from one line being too short to the next being too long. If you get my drift.

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