I liked this.
I thought the rhyme scheme and wording worked really well here.
I dunno who's voted it down, ecause it deserves to be higher than it is.

A lovely piece of work, indeed. The emotion, the depth.. the flow was wonderful! Good work, and good luck.

Prettyy cool poem dacey!!!

but this one part did make sense:
You go say hi, come of as serene- of or off?

I really enjoyed this great job! You have alot of talent. It is something when we are still in school from one year to the next how so many people we know change over on summer. really good job!

I dont get it Dacey.
But i love love love how it sounds.
Is this the one you were talking about?
Probably you knew I wouldn't understand it.