Comments : How Could I Lose You?

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "It was us against the world,
    I guess I just didn't expect a breakup to break us"

    Such a sad story.. You used some beautiful language and it just added to the poignant sad tone..
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    This poem is full of emotions, love and loss and fear. The heart will never get used to the break up and beign human we fear beign alone and forgotten. This poem is beautifull i loved reading it :))