Omg! it is sooo good! |
by Shoooleeee
It's great ! thanks for the comment about mine (: |
I love it alot alot alot!!!!!!!!!!! |
by NeferNoir
WOW!! i love this poem... it's so original and interesting.. seriously, this poem deserves more than 5/5!!! :) |
Great job! Good flow! Very true too! |
by aDORKable x3
First, I would like to say that the title dragged me into the poem (oh, btw, I love the lyrics you have on your page, I knew most of them) |
by Squirrel
WOW! i like what you say i believe that it says that society forms us to be exactly like everyone else and never lets us forget were all the same 5/5 |
That was amazing and so true in many different ways. People are only going skin deep, they don't understand what they are doing. |
by Rocky
Another really deep poem from you. i must say that i.m quite impressed by your work.the poems i've read ,so far, tend to be quite deep. your obviesly a person whos learned to question and think, instead of following blindly.anyway i also like you style of writing. your poems tend to flow well and are interesting to read( i,ve gotten so sick of rhymin couplets that sound pretty, but have no real meaning)so yeah. just keep up the good work |