MAN UR GOOD...I THOUGHT I WAS BUT UR SOOO YOUNG N UR POEMS THEY SPEAK OF AO MUCH PAIN U REMIND ME SO MUCH OF A YOUNGER ME...TRY NOT TO CUT...I KNO IT SEEMS LIK A BETTER WAY OUT BUT IN THE END...IT'S NOT

Ugh very graphic, and definitely cliche, but your going through a stage in your life, i suppose all you can do is express you feelings through poetry.