Hey, i love this poem it is good bcoz i can relate to it. real good you have a lot of talent keep it up. comment on sum of mine if u hav time plz. tnx n once again gr8 poem

I love your poem! Very deep, well written. Nicely put. Keep up the good work! Another 5/5!

Good poem but at the end saying rest at hell's core I think that going through pain that someone angry might say that but it's still a little harsh..keep writing though :) like it anyway....great flow too!!! :D

*Trixie*

I just don't like it when it swears

I like this poem...it has alot of meaning

xx AimZz

Very nice job! I like it a lot. It is very well written. 5/5 from me!!
~Promy

Well written poem. I think you are a good poet as well. However I am displeased at the flaming of a certain person's poem. I assume you know of whom i speak. If she wanted to correct a small spelling error she was just helping you. I hate having errors in my work, but, maybe you like them? Oh well. Don't I also remember you from flaming jess's poems? The one you accused of copying songs? Ahh yes that was you, incredibly rude ya know. It seems you have a tendency to be insolent, perhaps you should shut up and stick to writing? I don't mean to be so blunt but i cannot think of any euphemisms. Please just mind your own business and i'm sure everything will be fine.

I love your poems. I don't know what else to say. This one isn't my favorite but I really like it still. Your messages are really clear.