The distance between us

by Mark   Dec 17, 2006


Familiar you seem
in the dust of light
so long distance
though still in my sight

my self centered mind
binds me to the ground
can't move, can't reach you
my mind and my body is bound

Running in circles
out of order
my way is gone
around me disorder

sounds scared
sounds mad
feeling anger
feeling sad

Familiar you seem
in the dust of light
so long distance
unwrapped I might

getting behind
distance now too long
I have no chance
for remembering our song

the song of faith and destiny
sadness is here
giving up
cause the other road is full of fear

Distance in the new road
is only one breath
though not a better road
the road for my own painful death

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  • 17 years ago

    by Elvira

    Omg u do really have talent i gotta give my man mark props keep it up
    I LOVE IT

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Omg!! another sad poem....excellent job! i like it!

  • 17 years ago

    by awww

    Ooh... i felt that one... few words but it went so deep... nicely done... i hope you overcome your sadness... keep it up...

    ~angel~

  • 18 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    I loved your poem.In my opion, the last stanza was the best, but the whole poem was quite good.You have real telent! :) 10/10 Well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Mark, I loved it! Nice flow, and emotion! GREAT WORK!!! love you! 4.6/5

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