Beautiful!! It's great, and very true |
by Scrittore
Awesome writing! |
But i cant...i luv him too much...it'll hurt too bad when it has to stop...i cant survive without "his" touch, but my best friend, i need him so much |
Powerful message indeed & i hope readers extract that message from it too. |
by Lithium
Awww thats a really cute poem, a nice message to great job xox sam |
I loved it! This poem is soo great! |
I love it!! it is so true and it flows really nice. thanx for the comment...i know it's long but i'm glad u took the time to read it. thanx and God bless |
Very inspiring. Wonderful job. |
Very inspiring. Wonderful job. |
by debbylyn
Very nice inspirational uplifting piece. I enjoyed the excellent rhyming and flow. 5/5 |