I love poems that are short and to the point .This fills that like very much so,very well written.
There is always light at the end of the tunnel,Shalom and Happy Hanukka

My mom is 35. :) You sound pretty sweet. You just need some help on your spelling, like in the post louseing, loosing. If you ever need any help just email me, I'll read anything for a friend. The only spelling mistakes I found here are:

To many tears,
To many fears.

It should be:

Too many tears,
Too many fears.

Other than that this was a great poem! You really have some talent. I hope your husband gets better. I usually choose which stanzas/lines i love the best, and in here I cannot choose!

Excellent.

5/5

Ya its definately diffucult to remain calm even if you think everything will be ok, I'm sure he'll be fine, great poem 5/5

Great poem! Sorry about your hubby. He will be fine. I'm also batteling something. My cousin, the person I've looked up to all of my life might have cancer... There are bad times in life... We just have to believe and overcome them!! 5/5
My Prayers Are With You!

~Shae