I love this poem :) Again just some spelling problems:

From yeater year. **I'm not sure what this means maybe from year to year? Or is it the title Yester?

The one that was full of star dust, **stardust

Is now ten fold. **tenfold

Other than that, beautifully written. You did a great job on this. Again I cannot choose which part i love the best!

Great Job!

5/5

I liked it, its short and sweet....i think its about you, and 34 isnt old lol i read your profile

As we get older we gain wisdom and knowledge, and we pass it down in time,great job again 5/5

You have a great outlook on getting older, even though you are not "old" at all. gaining wisdom and passing it on is a great thing. my outlook has been look at all the things i let slip away over the years. friendships have been my theme lately. your poem helped me alot . thanks!! :)

keith

Although the rough structure, I liked the rhyming and choosing of words especially in this poem. The flow went nicely this time, 5/5 keep it up :)