WoW. nicely done, If he don't like it come sing it to me. Hehehe every one needs a love song.

That is sooo cool! I wouldn't have the guts to sing to anyone. Your lyrics are beautiful. Great Job! I love the chorus.

Excellent

5/5

Aww, thats so nice, i thought the chorus was the best bit , 10/10 well done!!!

Absolutely wonderful. :) *5/5

Verse 2 is definitely my favourite. It was a very sweet piece, and I'm sure your boyfriend will really appreciate it. 5/5.

Another great poem by a great poet, you have done really a great job here. keep up the great work like always. take care.
Also a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

Loved the lyrics they were great, im sure he'll love it :)