by Poetically Speaking Dec 17, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I gave you 24 white roses, |
Awwww. That's such a sweet and beautiful poem! I absoultly loved it! |
by ABake
This is gorgous! |
This would be a very nice starter poem but it lacks something I don't know but it doesn't come off the page. It just seems as if it is flat words, no emotion, even though it's obvious ypu put a part of your heart into it. |
Haha not bad bro, great flow and meaning she'll like this one 2 excellent job 5/5 |