by ViCTORiA Dec 17, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Over the years we stuck together like glue but -now- i don't even know you. you told me you were always gunna be there for me. |
It's a good poem but in the beginning, I don't think it flows well. If it were me I would change Over the years we stuck together like glue but know i don't even know you. To Over the years we stuck together like glue but -now- i don't even know you. It just seems to flow a little better. Overall though it was a good poem. Thanx for the comment on my poem!! |